For What It's Worth

I found Jessica Wave's article in the raw section of Teen Ink. Its directed towards the price we put on our appearance. Although the first paragraph could be better for stating the thesis, it uses an example related to what she will be talking about. I believe the main thesis is that we literally can't afford to put such a high price on our appearence by wearing designer brands and such.

The first paragraph is not much of an attention grabber, but it does leave you wondering what kind of a direction the article will take. Jessica does manage to stay close to the topic in the seven paragraphs written. Although no actual sources are cited in the article, a lot of what is said pertains to common knowledge and her personal experiences. For example, she talks of her mothers ideas of 'worth' when she was growing up; it ment Authenticity and character to her mother.

I was already on the same side of the argument as the author, so my mind wasn't changed any. The article was effective, but I think the other side could have been shown a little better. She does take a very small chance on looking at the other side of the argument, that the way we present ourselves is a big deal to some; however, she could have talked more on peoples materialistic views. It would have been easy to build up and tear back down for effect. Aside from that one fallout, I did enjoy "For What It's Worth", as I agree with many of the points. The closing was definatly effective.